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wow....this is....wow. that was one of the best writings I ever read. you know, I don't think anyone could even begin to dissect this. It so...........I cant even think of ...

gabe and Mary got it right. already workin on it october girl --mark--

soccer! *clapclapclap* soccer! *clapclapclap* --mark--

this was an excellent essay but I disagree on some parts. Yes, it is mean to test products on animals and abuse them, but eating them is a different story. ...

If I call will you arrive? If I yell your name will you yell back? If the world needs a hero can you finish the job? Death cannot stop you, ...

it's a haiku, and i say 5/10 for ye young one. for I cannot read thy yellow words

6/10

i only got halfway way through, but thats OK! yea......cool. Gabes writting some good stuff. i think this book is going to be stupen.(you dont deserve the "dous". just kidding.) ...

coolness to the max. I think is one of your best poems yet. I have to agree with G to the abe though. those lines threw me of the poem ...

nice. I like the way this poem flows. It's very rhythmic (is that a word?) I'm pretty sure you have all the punctuation stuff right. all in all, it's a ...

sup....yea, I have no idea where to put commas and only correction is that I don't think female mooses(meese?) have antlers. -just call me cool

k, first I'm not being literal when i said the moon howls, and high beams are on a car.

Sight whirls legs turn to jelly. Down the throat of a whale and into the belly Black swirls body goes numb, don't turn your back on the door just a ...

cool.I think your story line has the potential to be really cool.

wow.that...was...cool. that has some very deep meanings in it, that I would not expect from a 17 year old.you have a good outlook on life. just a question, what religion ...