hippie_vampire

Just to clear things up. No the hole thing is not going to be in dialog, only the pro-log/first chapter. I'm sorry if it's confusing, it's just supposed to be ...

I love this! And that's true about most story book princess. I really like how you diatribe the hole thing:) I can't want to read more! (OK ya sorry it's ...

Don't cry over spilled milk, it with wash out. Just cry over spilled grape juice instead. You laugh at me because I'm different, I laugh at you because you're a ...

"Myself. I live alone and don't go to school so..."~Colin parents, my uncle and my horse."~Cuna "My best friend Silvia. And that's it...I don't really have any other friends."~Miranda In ...

Chapter One “Mommy!” “No Miranda, look away!” “Mommy!” “Sweetie, it’s too late, they’ve got her.” “No! I love you mommy!” “Ahhhhhhh!!!” “Get the father too.” “What ab

The only typo I found was this. An hour later, when I had managed to navigate down through the labyrinth that had once been my home, the screams were still ...

I'm really bad at proof reading(I have a hard time even doing my own stuff!) but I'm good with plots and stuff if you know what I mean. One thing ...