hippie_vampire

Chapter one. I sit pretending to work on my laptop in a 24-hoer coffee shop. Taking a sip of my caramel late as I brush a stand of my long ...

CHARACTER FORMAT Name: Kemima though she is normally known by the name Raven. Team (Devas or Harlots): Harlots Appearance (Pictures are fine): Short black hair with dark blue highlights so ...

I just want to apologize to everyone for getting defensive up there. It's just that this was the first story I ever posted on the net so I guess I ...

Hiya! Pro-log Just a quick point, easy mistake to make though :) 'Prologue' I loved this prologue, I like the way you use the dictionary quote. Its really creative. You ...

Prologue Love. It's a strange word, it can mean so many things to so many different people. The dictionary says: "a profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person." But love ...

This is really good. I like the thing about the tiny lion :D I was however wondering about the history thing. Was this supposed to be the first time the ...

I really liked this chapter and I am exited to quickly go to the next chapter and see why the can-man is trying to kill her! Now I would say ...

Name: Culu Age: 18 Race: Vampire Clan: Echelon Appearance: This History: Um is it OK if I revel later? other: Up for love I guess.

Thanks everyone for your feed back! Um this is really embarrassing but i accidentally posted the unedited version rather then the edited (hince the extent of typos.) I think I ...

Has this been forgotten?

Yes Syte I do believe we are.

I'm really sorry everyone but my life is just too busy right now so I'll have to drop out. Sorry!

*I love your signature!* "Lamasa..."~Colin. "Anyone in my family...I don't really know anyone ells anyway."~Cuna. "Well considering I hate everyone ells in the world be best friend Silvia."~Miranda. I

Has everyone forgotten? Ahh I liked this story! *cries*

I think I'm going to have to drop out...sorry!