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  • General Articles Re: An Editorial on Piper Kansas.

    In an effort to please the parents protesting its employee’s decision to fail their children, the Piper, Kansas School Board contested her decision. The school board’s choice to side with ...

    Thu Dec 15, 2011 1:28 am
  • Lyrics Re: The man on moon song!

    You really can't review this. because it doesnt have substance. Its like the baba black sheep have you any wool song. BUT who knows. maybe children of america will sing ...

    Sun Jan 23, 2011 6:19 pm
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I'm So Full Of It

    I’m Full of Lies, I’m Full of lies, teary eyes, long sighs, kisses goodbye, I’m Full of the night sky and the silence passing by. I’m Full of self defense ...

    Sun Jan 23, 2011 5:05 am
  • Lyrics Re: KILL (not SHOOT) the Messenger

    Goodmorning -- This is cute & catchy. I like the overall piece because I think catchy is what you were going for. If not well then thats what the audience ...

    Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:26 pm
  • Lyrics Re: So Beautiful.

    Goodmorning -- Sorry for such a quick reply but the title just drew me in. I read your piece...then read the comments. I see it as this, There are two ...

    Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:20 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Lucky

    Goodmorning -- Sorry for such a short review. I loved your word choice, it gave the piece imagery along with an edgy vibe. I hope that is what you're going ...

    Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:07 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Perfecting the art of goodbye

    Goodmorning -- I liked your wording very much. It displays very good imagery keep that going. I would like to make one point, my impression was more of a poem ...

    Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:00 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Rewind

    What a shame it is that I cant apologize, you held my hand through thick and thin but I just make u cry. You take them so seriously and furiously ...

    Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:53 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Those Old Clothes

    Hello :) I really like this one, for one thing I can picture this senario in my head. Of someone whose tired of pretending and "throwing away her old clothes" ...

    Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:21 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Once Alone

    Is this more a poem? Or lyrics? This is a pretty piece, you just have to determine what you are going for. (Song or not) formatting it would help a ...

    Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:11 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Missing You

    This is simple, and gorgeous. Good for a nice tune.

    Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:52 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Alone Today

    I'm so sorry if i gave you the impression i THOUGHT you were an angry person in general. I just meant for that song i can tell you were angry. ...

    Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:45 pm
  • Lyrics Re: I See You

    Haha If you look at the end of my song, it says grammar isn't my thing. The music is.

    Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:37 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Ungrateful

    I don’t mean the things I say possible: I don't mean the hurtful things I say I know its implied, but its kind of like saying the green cat is ...

    Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:32 pm
  • Lyrics Re: Sisterhood

    First off, sorry to sound like a grammar loser, but the / are soooo unnessasary and quite frankily annoying. I like how you based this off a book. I don't ...

    Sat Nov 06, 2010 4:59 pm


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price