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Re: Addiction
This was amazing. I love it. It deserves all the credit in the world. You are extremely creative.
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Mirror Girl
"Then Satan burned her in her sleep and sewed her lips together; and with the fires of hell he sealed her in the glass forever." favorite line, defiantly. This poem ...
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Re: Alone Today
Sometimes everyone wants a piece But there’s not enough to go round I really liked this line. There are multiple meanings behind it, if you really think about it. the ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: But then again, who believes a seal?
this made me laugh. I don't know why. I actually liked the first one better, I think I spent about five minutes trying to figure out what that poem would ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: If I
I really really really like these rhymes... and the whole idea to the song. no advice. I just wanted to tell you that it's really great ;D keep writing.
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: your blind.
The dust is falling, and the phone waits, as I'm begging, for a renewed, real you to call me. To call me. But it's silent, forever. Your stained now, your ...
Aug 29, 2010
