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well done! I do have to agree, you have very lovely imagery. My only concern is this last line. I think it could be a little trippy. It seems too ...

Two sets of stairs, but I soar to the top. Three hallways down, yet I still never stop. We open each door, and we break all the glass. we gaze ...

I think you are pretty great! I love nature, it always seems new to me. And when you take a picture, for once, it is new forever. I do recommend ...

I actually do find power in here. I like the confidence. Very well done. I do agree about the flow. It seems a bit uneven. I don't really mind the ...

The stanza's need to be rearranged just a bit. They are a big part of poetry, they can actually create more emotion, believe it or not. I've learned this over ...

This has lots of potential, but you are right, it does need work! I mainly chose this because of the title. Sometimes it's good to just put the meaning right ...

I can't exactly get the emotion from this piece. I feel that emotion plays a very important role, depending on the type of poetry. I don't know whether this was ...

ahhh! I like this. It's great. I can feel the warmth, the joy. Imagery is one of the most important parts of poetry. You want to imagine the feeling, the ...

I like these types of poems, they just seem to flow, they make me think for a while. I'm not as good when it simply comes to realistic poetry like ...

Lovely! I honestly have no advice, haha. This was beautiful. I loved the twist, the vocabulary, the imagery. You are a great writer, never stop.

My favorite would probably have to be number three. I like how the flower is completely in focus. These are all very clear and colorful, they are beautiful ;D one ...

This is very nice. Very realistic. Very emotional. It really made me sit and think. That's what poetry should do ;D I do think there should be more imagery though! ...

Yet another random poem. From a year ago. Trying to get a few differently written poems up so people can get a handle on my writing style. ^^ No god ...

well done ;D I really like the imagery here. It made me feel like i was in a carnival. My only advice would be to make the purpose or meaning ...

I really loved this. It really did fill me up with emotion. And the title actually helped a lot, as obvious as it was, and made me feel the pain ...