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Some people aren't at agreement with these rhymes, but I actually love them. They have a nice flow to them. They give more character. It was a day when something ...

I really like the title. It gave me a different view on the poem. Like this person makes you feel that you're at home, that they complete a part of ...

Some of the rhymes were a tad bit forced, and the flow was a little iffy, but I do like the whole idea to the poem. It gives the reader ...

This is rather captivating. I especially love the end, and I think you have a natural talent at writing poetry. It's also very easy to relate to, for some. There ...

The whole flow is a little iffy, but the imagery and use of words are rather nice. I do suggest that you try to move on to more original subjects, ...

The whole flow is a little iffy, but the imagery and use of words are rather nice. I do suggest that you try to move on to more original subjects, ...

The whole flow is a little iffy, but the imagery and use of words are rather nice. I do suggest that you try to move on to more original subjects, ...

I'm defiantly not one for politics, and I didn't know what to expect when I read the title. I thought it would possibly be some creative form of words. But ...

At first, I was a little iffy about it. But then I read the whole thing, and I absolutely fell in love with it. I have to agree with the ...

warning: This is a joke, and a pretty catchy one at that. I decided I'd try to write something a little modern, just to experiment. It's not really my thing, ...

I really do love this, it's quite beautiful, and the heading is rather capturing, but the question is, who is she ? For all I know, that could probably be ...

I really believe that this was absolutely dazzling, as strange as it may sound. I love the whole idea, the imagery, the metaphors, descriptions, emotions. It's all very amazing, and ...

This is very great. Yes, the flow gets a little iffy here and there, but in all honesty, who cares? It is beautiful enough as it is, and I love ...

I do like the whole idea of this, but it really needs to go deeper. imagery ! There is so much imagery that can match the definition of 'pretty' or ...

ok. here I go. Alright...so, I wrote this poem last night while I was half asleep. xD I didn't do too much editing, but I was peer-pressured into posting it. ...