heyalyrae

i really loved this poem because i felt thatg i could relate to it. it was very beautiful. Wow, i just don't know what to say. i really loved it. ...

that was really beautifull. it was defenently a pleasure to read.only nit pick is that capitalized every line is when it need not. otherwise i really enjoyed reading it.

I like the way this written, the language really fits this piece. my only nit-pick would be that there is no capitalization. other wise i think it is very beautifully ...

I love the way this piece is arranged. It really brings out the emotion when it is written this way compared to a more tradidional form. Very well done. beautifully ...