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I like the poem, but what's up with all the quotation marks. Anyway, I liked the anger and wanting

Wow, i could really see the emotion and anger coming through the lyrics. This would make a great song. I really like the way the music is supposed to sound.This ...

Again this is really good. It dosn't seem like a country song though, a little more rock.probably because of the elecrtic quitar part. The lyrics are kind of country though. ...

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I like this poem. it's honest and relatible, and those are always the best kinds of poems. The only thing i had trouble with is this line "You told me ...

This was really good. "We were perfect,We were this poem. in love.We made mistakes, And we gave up.I have no regrets,But what about you?" those are great and relatible lines. ...

Wow! not a songwritter? this was great. I can really hear how i would make this song sound. i dissagre with lordgluzman, i hear the beat in my head. but ...

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WOW! This is defenently one of the best poem i've ever read on the subject of cutting and depression. It was really amazing. I especially loved the last for Stanzas, ...

"Every step a deathly struggle,Each breath a driving force,No one to help with the journey,A life filled with remorse.A glinting knife a warm invite," This is my favorite part of ...

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I really liked this because it was simple and you understand the emotion coming from it. The begining was my favorite. the only thing i didn't get was the "done" ...

"The border must not be crossed It must stay real and true, without complications Because the truth is;There is no future beyond this line There never was.Stay on track and ...

I really enjoyed this. I can almost picture this as a real country song. It could be just how i'm hearing it in my head but the begginging chorus line ...

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