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hershey

  • Art & Photography Re: A few pieces of mine

    You're wrong. These are really good. It's cool that you can draw really good pictures in 5 minutes. You should add pictures more often. And maybe you could color one ...

    Nov 18, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What Kind Of Fool Am I?

    That was really really really really good, but I must agree with KookieKate and note that you didn't really keep the third stanza like the others. The first and second ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: "outside" shots

    Awesome pictures. I think you have a talent for photography. I liked the first picture of the light. You can see the texture of the bricks really well. The street ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Felony assault with a bucket

    Thanks for the reviews. It's all thanks to my mom that I didn't get in trouble that day. Vox Nihili, when my dad called my mom to tell her about ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Felony assault with a bucket

    This story is true. The father sat there, the only male in the room, surrounded by mothers. His daughter's first day of preschool was today, and his wife was out ...

    Sep 22, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Brown Bear

    This bear is so adorable! The texture is really good. The one thing I could critic is the slightly large neck, which someone else said, but I'm saying it again ...

    Sep 22, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Drawing of Feet.

    I can't draw people to save my life, even if it's just feet so good job. Someone else said this already, but it doesn't look too flat, it looks 3-D ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Desolation

    This is to everyone who reviewed... THE PERSON SAID THE LINK DIDN'T WORK!!!!!!! YOU NEED TO READ THE WRITING!!!!! That's all I want to say. I bet the pic would ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: King of Carrot Flowers pt 1

    Super cool drawing. I like how there's the stuff in the background. I think it's cool how it's based off a song. Again, awesome drawing. Hershey

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Snow Photo 1

    I really like this photo. The only thing I could suggest is maybe you could have taken this photo when it was sunny out. Just my suggestion, ignore it if ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Dragon

    WOW!!!!!!!! This drawing is insanely good. If you haven't posted more drawings on this site, you should. PM me if you do. Good job. You get an A++++++ Hershey

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Italian Necklace

    I saw a few punctuation mistakes. But other than that, just fine. I think this could be a great prologue or first chapter to a story. I really liked it, ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Not Quite

    It has the potential to be a great story, but I have some things you might want to consider to change. It was confusing. I had to go back and ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Package

    'Ello, CK, Thanks for the critic. I like this story better than the other one too. I'm thinking of deleting Dead But Not Gone. What do you think? I'll edit ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Beautiful Stranger

    I am proud to be the first person to review your awesome story. Down to business. It's very good; there was description, it flowed well, blah, blah, blah. However, me ...

    Sep 18, 2008


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