hermes92

ty for the reviews!Im going to add more soon.

Heather walked down the street and into the gates leading to the high school. The next thing that happened is her books went flying all over the entrance. A guy ...

Great poem it had rhythm and rhyme and everything else. I liked how it explained the different types of love and how to love because love is often hard to ...

I loved this story it kept me reading. I sat on the edge of my seat not wanting to stop to breathe reading it. It was a great tale about ...

It was a beautiful story and it left me in suspense for more. I liked how you worded it so realistically. I have to admit I was a little thrown ...

You did a good job at narrating it. It made alot of sense but there were a few things that did not make sense about it because i had a ...

You have made a couple capitalization errors but aside from that it turned out to be a great work. I loved the ending. The tone of the story caught my ...

It was a good piece about a couple. i was a little confused because I was looking in the sci fi section then i found that but i like it ...

Leona sat in the middle of her room still as a rock,listening to the constant scratching on her window. Her parents were gone for three days. She gets out of ...

My name is Jamie. I am twenty. I am very inspiring and i never fail to give good advice. I love hearing other peoples' point of views. I am bilingual ...

Great! That is a heartwarming story about how you came to terms with yourself and gays. The guy in your story had influenced you by showing you that everyone is ...

I liked how it was in depth. It made a lot of sense, It sounded good, and it was correct. Overall it was the definition of a good work.

It was amazing in every detail. It was a good description of a blizzard and its effects. I liked your use of sensory, vocabulary, and description. The poem was altogether ...

It was a good piece of writing. It detailed that the bird was going through his plight in all of its arrogance only to show that his plight would backfire ...

This poem was good in its detail. The name was especially what caught my attention. You should go in depth more. Everything was perfect except for the poem structure.