-
Re: The Black Paean
Yeah I know it's not garbage, I just couldn't resist... :wink: Anyway, thanks for the analysis. The prologue losing steam is a problem that it's had since the first draft, ...
Apr 23, 2007 -
Re: Opus Irae
Thanks a ton for the help. I think I'll just clarify some things. The twins are jinni themselves, but extremely powerful and reside in the sky, can travel among the ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Excerpt (No Title)
Thanks a ton for the feedback and everything. It's great that you're actually critiqueing it and not just saying "OMG PULLZTER PRIZE-WINN3R!!11". This is really going to help me improve ...
Oct 30, 2006