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Re: I don't Understand You.
when you was his husband, when you knew then and there, . this should be when you were his husband and also momma
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Falling
the typos have already been pointed out so it saves me the trouble! haha i really liked this, it was very gripping and i especially liked the way that you ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: A painful first kiss
I'd like to say it was original, but it really wasn't. It's pretty much the same Bella - Edward thing, except the names are changed, and the punctuation isn't right. ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: hi there, i'm not new but i havent been on here for a while.
i havent been on here for absolutely ages! i had an awful english teacher last year who put me off writing completely but ive got a new teacher this year ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: A painful first kiss
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Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: hatred
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Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: hatred
every year, lives are lost hearts are broken, but for what cost? a disagreement? one person's need? colour of skin, religion or creed? triggers are pulled, knives are drawn, we're ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Boys. [draft] chapter one.
wow i really loved this amazing use of vocabulary and really stylish writing style
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: newbie
Hello there Helen! I am Genevieve. So... what's the name of your story? I havent actually thought of a name i'm so indecisive i hope it'll just come to me ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: making a book longer
i always tend to rush a book i'm writing and i'll be halfway through the plot and it will be far too short any tips on dragging it out a ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: making a book longer
i always tend to rush a book i'm writing and i'll be halfway through the plot and it will be far too short any tips on dragging it out a ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
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Nov 28, 2007 -
Re: newbie
Hey there i'm helen, i'm 13 ive been interested in creative writing since i was about seven i am currently writing a fairytale/romance/fantasy book would be very grateful for any ...
Nov 28, 2007
