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Re: [deleted]
WOW :shock: :D i read 1 and 2 and i think they're both amazing and i really enjoyed reading them. It was weird reading my own name so many times ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: The thorn on my rose
I trace the petals with adoration, and pray that this beauty will never cease. But when I hope that such splendor, such glory will never expire, from beneath my trembling ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: I Used To Fly
I Used To Fly The sky was my canvas The color so blue My wings were my brush My inspiration was you. I love this stanza, it's brilliant! the way ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Perfection
I like the concept of this and the fact that it's your own feelings, did poetry help you through your hard times? Overall, this was really good, i liked how ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Sorry dad
wow, i think this is the definition of short and sweet! i like a short poem, and i like the concept of this especially. poetry has no rules, so who ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: To my father...
PG- I've referred to my relationship with my dad as a war where neither of us are backing down, and i'm asking is it up to me to back down, ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Ever Since
I see you're fairly new to YWS, welcome, if you have any questions or anything, feel free to PM me. I may not be a literary genious, but i am ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: To my father...
i wrote this spontaneously, which is weird for me cos i usually sit and plan a poem and consider devices and structure etc. but this came straight from the heart ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: He'd walked through a fire and he hadn't got burnt...
“Henry?” I asked tentatively as he perched himself awkwardly on the chair next to the bed. “Yeah?” “Why aren’t you hurt?” He looked up at me, his eyes full of ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: Partition
1. Partition My father drove me to Richard’s house on a cold, November evening. The heating in his car was broken, so we sat shivering, neither one of us attempting ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Twilight - A Reality.
heeey twilight fanfics can get a bit tedious sometimes, cos they always seem to have happy endings and i'd like them to be a bit darker- i reckon i'm an ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Guess?
hey i really enjoyed this! i am usually against gay pairings i must admit, but i'm becoming more open-minded as i get older! this story made me smile and at ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Right or wrong?
...dont like alien stories, don't be put off, it isnt like the typical alien, sci-fi stories, i promise!! Here is a scene from my story. Its an alien meets human ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: The land strikes back
The despondency strikes like a hundred knives, as if the air is awash with tragedy. The dark sky looms menacingly, inflicting dread upon those who cower below it. The mountains, ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: I don't Understand You.
Hey, i really liked this, i only noticed a few mistakes so here they are! :) how could you let him get to me? when you was his husband, this ...
Oct 21, 2008
