helenelizabethclarke

Hitchin up her dress of lace, Lipstick blood smeared on her face. Hair like straw, backcombed to shit, Black eye, swelled, like she took some hit. Staggerin, oh staggerin, like ...

This is just a short section from my story :) Constructive criticism please, it's sort of draft so i expect lots ;) xx -Helen x THIS IS BEATRICE'S PERSPECTIVE I’d ...

“Go on then,” Rob puffed up his chest arrogantly and cleared his throat, “fucking shoot me!” Indigo’s finger wavered on the trigger and a surge of terror pounded through me. ...

HAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA oh i loved this! i hated new moon, it was ridiculous and this just made me hate it even more. You are quite literally a literary genious! 8) my

Heeey, the title caught my attention, so i thought i'd review seeing as nobody else has, which is pretty sad :( Irresistible Features, SHOULD FEATURES BE CAPITALIZED? Life enraged with ...

topic description continued...IF YOU'VE READ MY FIRST CHAPTER AND DONT WANT TO read something that's a bit later on in my story, then don't read this! This is just a ...

I've added about 1000 words for anyone who wants to read xxxxxxxxxxx

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ENJOY AND CONSTRUCTIVELY CRITICISE LOVE YOU ALL xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx They all expect you to be the grieving daughter , I told myself. Just act like it f

Hard to come by, Impossible to touch Endless perfection, Doesn’t take much, Try to find it and You won’t succeed, Stumble across it And you’ll find more then greed. In ...

I sat there watching the clock wishing that the time would never come I didn't mind staying after school or anything like that but I didn't want to face what ...

Helloooo, I'm Helen here's my review 8) Two months ago, you held my hand. You said you loved me more than all the sea and land. This is a nice ...

I feel like a hypocrite reviewing your work as you're such a beautiful writer compared to me, so i'll just tell you what i think.. I love all of these ...

This is a section from a story i'm writing at the moment. It might not make sense because you dont know the full story and they always say DONT TELL ...

i dont write that much fiction really, i tend to write poetry more. Here is an attempt of mine, just a section from a story i'm writing. i would appreciate ...