helenelizabethclarke

Thank you for your reviews. I showed this to my teacher the other day and although she loved the idea and the passion, she said the technique wasn't quite there. ...

Blue lights, A knock on the door wakes me. A big man with a police hat is on my landing. He chews on gum, mouth open and saliva. Then I ...

Hellooo! This poem overall was fairly good. The opening line was my favourite, "Dear Woman and Man." I like the way you have excluded these people from being your parents, ...

Hi! I agree that this is very short, but I do think you have put in a lot of feeling & it is wild with emotion! Technically, you've included some ...

Thank you for taking the time to review! This piece is actually a one-off and I used it as coursework for my English GCSE, the guidelines were only "a piece ...

William At the back of the theatre, there is a small room. It is the type of room that would never quite be large enough to walk around in. It ...

Thanks for taking the time to review everyone, I appreciate it! I've edited the poem a little, tweaking a few things using your criticism and some of my own, so ...

Thanks for reviewing! :D I'd like to clear up the confusion as other people I've shown it to found it confusing as well! What I've tried to portray is that ...

I did not cry when I went to Auschwitz, I did not weep and I did not sob. Not even the fingernail etchings could bring a tear. Nor the hollow ...

I recently visited Auschwitz on a school trip and I wrote two pieces when I got back, one was a poem and the other was this. I'm still not sure ...

You might've noticed i'm posting lots of lyrics recently. It's just i'm making some beats on the computer, and when i pluck up the courage i might record my lyrics ...

Hi, the general theme of this was really touching and captivating. I get that you translated it from Russian, which is why some of the english doesnt make sense and ...

Heeeey, this was very endearing, if not a little generic, but if it's a pop song then generic is gooood! I particularly liked the La La La's, i love those ...

I'd love to be able to admit that I called this Annie May because of your reason, but nope! It's about a friend called Annie May and this is where ...

not sure really if this is lyrics or poetry? anyway, constructively criticise please x I’ve got my own opinions, But aint a get around girl, Don’t want to spread myself ...