helenelizabethclarke

Yes, I am, Season ticket holder for 4 years now! You know them? :D

The subject speaks for itself really, does anyone keep a blog on literature or just on general ramblings? I don't know if it's just me, but I love reading other ...

Daring to go without makeup! haha At Wembley with my brother, we are huge football/soccer fans (dependant on your nationality :D )

Hi, what a sweet poem! Very lovely, makes you feel all warm inside :') Firstly, I think there may be too many words in each line, maybe try cutting a ...

Hi, Sorry, but I did not like this very much at all. The rhyme scheme is a little fractured and not in the effective intentional way. Some of the rhymes ...

Thank you! Duffy is one of my favourite poets so being compared to her is an honour! Why don't you like the last line of the 1st stanza? Is it ...

Thanks for the invitation. It arrived last week, Hitting the doormat with an unwelcome bump. Nice curly font you used there, On gold and shiny paper. Very posh. I used ...

Hi, I think there may be potential here but regarding the style and structure, I didn't care much for it. You started with a rhyme "disguise" and "lies" then completely ...

There is a stranger in my bed. His eyelids twitch when he sleeps, I wonder if they always do. He clings to the covers as if he knows them, and ...

Here's the beginning of the new story i'm writing. What I want to know mainly is what you think of my protagonist? Is she strong enough so far, how can ...

Pain clouds every inch of my brain tears fears lies through the years flow through my veins.Its a shame that i remain the same half sane all the songs that ...

Hey thanks for your comments! I thought a bit about the 2nd stanza and if I could introduce it more coherently. However, I think the woman's thoughts in the poem, ...

Hi! I like the idea of this, but i think it could be executed better. But, if you're new to poetry then that's great- ideas are where everything comes from, ...

Here’s to you, Mr Poet Man, Chin chin. I am free from your chains at last, Metaphorical, of course. What other type would you use, My dear? I thought I ...

Rough draft, constructive criticism required please! The Doctor said, I think you're sick, Take these pills and wear a smile, Now quick, quick, quick, I'm late for a round of ...