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Hey thanks for the reviews. Selene- her secret is her body. Nobody's ever seen it before, it's like she's giving it away... Emma- I got my inspiration from a decision ...

We wait until our wedding night. Frantic fingers paw at me And a pool of white lace trickles away. My secret is exposed, Like untouched snow devoured by first sight. ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS :) So, this was a very interesting poem to read. First of all, I think you did a good job of rhyming but a few of ...

Hi, I'll be straight, but constructive. Firstly, i'm not a fan of poems like this. It's a little generic. I think the whole point of being a poet is to ...

So, I wrote this in the style of Carol Ann Duffy for my english presentation. Enjoy! Mrs Dali I sit and watch him melt another clock. A wedding gift from ...

Hey thanks! Categorised is spelt with an s here in the UK. :D

Just a little poem I wrote earlier. Any suggestions are welcome but I just wanted to share with you... She asked for my star sign, Winced when I said Aries. ...

Agreed. Muse are overrated and their link with Twilight now just makes them even worse.

I edited this a little using some of your marvellous and helpful ideas! Have i changed it for the better or worse though haha? I don't think this one's ever ...

Blogs of thoughts are the best! I'd read it :D Here's mine I just started

sucked on the pillow like a teat? Does he think its a marshmallow? Please. Why the please? It seems an appropriate simile to me. I don't understand the Drake reference. ...

Reads it with the mind perhaps.

Heeeyyy, no reviews?! It deserves some and I hate when that happens so i'll give you one :D I like this. I think the mood is sustained throughout and you ...

If you're into indie brit films, I watched a great film the other night called Disco Pigs. It's set in Cork, Ireland and the accents are very heavy so you ...

We did indeed & I'm not ashamed to admit that I cried like a baby that day! Do you support anyone? I lead a double life, there's the poet side ...