hekategirl

green

heres the link to Potter Puppet Pals 1: And heres the link to Potter Puppet Pals 2: the first one is WAY better, the only part I like about the ...

actually I think its pink and GREEN, I don't see any blue on there.

The Beatles vs The Beach Boys

Your natural writing is great Sam! just the first part seemed forced and a little itty bitty bit forced at the end and middle. Thats it :-D

jail

I read this, but then I read that you edited with all of their suggestions. I can't comment on this becasue I don't which parts you really wrote or what ...

You used the word 'blur' way to much in this poem. And at the end of the last stanza where you say she dies it happend to abrupty for me. ...

Man that sucks! but this belongs more in Randomness doesn't it?

haha! luv your sig darkmoon! and don't feel bad emotion_less, you'll prolly get a nickname here. BTW welcome! you can call me Sierra if you want, thats my real name.

ren and stimpy

try using Mozilla Firefox, it might work then.

This is like the worst thing i've ever written and should be tossed out the window and eaten by verochious dogs. And don't think i'm saying this just to get ...

Your long tangled hair with little peices of broken twigs sway through the wind, Your big goofy grin shines like the rays of the sun, I think your smiling at ...

Jackson Five vs Steavie Wonder