hekategirl

Thanks, EBM, no I have to change my avatar... :roll: :wink: 5/10 Eh, so-so.

Lamas!!! There's two!!! 10/10 ^What she said :P

Gimme a S! *Someone screams S!* Gimme a H! *Someone says H!* Gimme a I! *Somene says I!* Gimme a M! *Yet, another person says M!* Gimme another M! *Silence* ...

It stills says it's considered for deletion, I'll think of something to say...but what...:? hmmm..

Oh, Chandni!! Do people like come into my house and watch my life and write poems about it!?!?!? I can sooooooo relate to this. Because of that fact I'm a ...

This is fantastic, I really like this. It's so...rich and full. Very nice.

Tangerine

I agree with J.Haux on all her critques. This is very reptitive poem and the lines don't really connect very well (Like Haux said). Try adding more depth to it, ...

So wouldn't we have to ask questions?

Black

Ok sounds a bit wierd, but at what age do you stop being a young writer (ie able to use this site)? is it undetermined and at some point you ...

Hey-lo!! Welcome! I'm hekategirl and you can pretty much call me anything you want, I really don't have a nickname :D See you around :elephant:

Well, what do you want to talk about?

Oh my god, this is awsome, frankly beutiful that's is all I can say. I really really really really really love this. I have no critque, you make me jealous ...

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