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This is very good, it had good flow. But I agree with Kylie J, change the punctuation. but other then that it was very good.

I love this, very good. No critque.

This is really good, it had good flow and imagry. I don't think it needs more but it would be better with more. The last line seems like an ending ...

This is very good, loved it. This line here is great: "you are a ship so long anchored at one place that," Nice imagry. But here I think you ment ...

I can see you are getting better at writing your poems but their is still alot missing, like Reichieru said, play with the sences, feelings and images. It gives it ...

Getting Jiggy With It--Will Smith

It's a myth that men can't be raped, EBM. If a boy is uncomfortable with a sexual situation, requests it to stop, and the girl ignores him and keeps going--it's ...

:shock: wow thats amazing *runs to find pennies*

[quote="ElectricBlueMonkey"]*Cough*... Spice Girls are scary. I mean..."zig-a-zig, ha"? [quote] I totally agree, and the scary thing is...I know all the words to their songs *eep!* I listend to them o

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If you get nominated you become a VIP, there is no vote or anything, only one person has to nominate you. Or I might be wrong, but i'm pretty sure ...

Ann never punched the cow. For when she did, the mess danced nonsensically into vegetation and muddy shoes. Joe loved cookies so the Devil brought some chocolate buttons that growled ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...

Eh, whats up, doc?

The Illusionist of Marcea, you are the very skillful illusionist, you're immortal except for one day a year. In believing that everything is a mean to an end, your utilitarian ...