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Re: Last letter
Give Me Novacaine
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: A Bit of English Fun
Bwahaha...Imagine what the Period Villian good do. Utter chaos I tell you. Utter..chaos.
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: An Angel
Hello :D I'd just like to say I'm a sap for love stories and that this one is no exception, although it seemed a little flat. I know it was ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: AH! Look what we did!
w00t! (I can say that now, it's in the flippin dictionary) and no Pepsi for me thanks, I'm a strict Sierra Mist drinker =P Go YWS!
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: breath held the world may quiet, still
I LOVE this. Everything was so vivid it gave me the chills. Like someone else said it gave me the feeling of drowning, which I thought was really amazing! it ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: No More (I'm done)
I can completely relate to what you're saying, but it's littered with too many cliches to be moving. Try to avoid saying things like "heavy heart" and "whisper into each ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Yay for old farts! thanks for the welcomes :D
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: Fair Weather Friends
That was awesome. It was cute yet dark...like an cookie with arsenic filling. The flow was beautiful, except for a couple parts here: Two of them, on a journey bound, ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
*cough* no one probably remembers me but I'm back after being a lazy shlump...yeah I have no other exuse except that lame one. But the point is I'm back for ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: Seven Deadly Sins #3 [Wrath]
I liked this, but it lacked something. You had some good imagry but it didn't really spark any response from me. It seemed more like a textbook overview of Wrath, ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: In The Forests of the Night
Yes, that is true with the many powers for vampires, but you got to consider that Risika is a very powerful vampire. Not all vampires are so adept.
Jul 31, 2006 -
Re: The Firefly's Glow
This is an enjoyable poem, very nice imagry but there was quite a few cliched refrences. 'Heart ripped to shreds' 'shadow of greif' 'dancing fireflies' although they aren't really that ...
Jul 30, 2006 -
Re: Person Above Ya!
^Fences
Jul 29, 2006 -
Re: In The Forests of the Night
I absolutely LOVE this book, It's by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes and she wrote when she was 15. It's about a vampire troubling with her past. It is a small book so ...
Jul 29, 2006 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
OK! Here I am this is definitly the last time you will here that hekategirl is coming back for good! becuase I am here to stay!!!! I promise!!!! *Big Hug ...
Jul 29, 2006
