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The Who vs Led Zepplin

For a dream this is not that confusing, it actualy sort of makes sense. All I can say is good adaptation of a dream.

It is....but your also sopposed to make up your own....

FREDERICK THE EVIL BUTTER STICK!!!! er...original?

Erm...where did it go....? I want to read even if you think its bad, Sam....

Hmmm...don't know what to think of this, it didn't seem very unique, but it was a good poem.

For some strange reason I can really, really relate. And I unterstand it, I don't think its confusing. I like the first line the most, I though it descirbed very ...

I like it, but like Ieatworms said it was a bit to wordy, but really good for a first poem!

I LOVE her! not enough to buy her CD though, but enough to turn up the radio so loud when I hear her songs to make it go kablooi :P

Cute. And sweet, I reminded me of Shel Silverstien poems, with the rhyming ending. I also like 'b r o k e n' being spaced like that, very original.

YES!!! that was the other thing, pick a tense!!!!!! it was bugging me so much!!! and also the thing about the Dad, I don't know why I forgot those....

Defitently my style, morbid humor, love it. I thought this was original and funny. "“I love you,” she said Her voice coming out in Sweet clumps of cotton candy" Sweet ...

Oh my gosh, that was great. You could smell, feel, hear everything that was going on. 'twas great Sam :D And areida, I've read the whole thing put together and ...

^^^Is talking to me on AIM :P

^Needs to accept me as a member of YWS Mentors