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I love that song, Sam, don't know why though. Cool-Gwen Stefani

You need more backround, for one thing I'm not even sure where they are! its pretty ovious when the battle starts but you need to explain where Cathor is going, ...

Goodbye :cry: hope life treats you well :cry: we'll miss ya :cry:

I give you, Calibur a 8/10 I like because its animated :P

Isn't Angels and Deamons the prequel to the DaVinci Code?

Enjoy today Persue tomorrow Cherish yesterday Grinning everyday behind your back, watching your soft ears turn bright pink, someone once compared you to a lump of red clay. Was it ...

I don't remember what relitive it was but I never knew him, my mom did, but it was like an uncle or something but anyway he had a sickness that ...

Thats why I did it, I don't care if you use it. You should try and re-write the second one to like I did the first one.

TOO MANY DOTS!!! I can see that you wanted a long pause but thats way too many dots in my ohpinion. Their were a few formating problems in both sections ...

^Is in love with TBR

OK well that is what you were talking about, Rei. Well thats just fate really, I mean their might have been something that you would have done if you homeschooled ...

*nods* I didn't think I'd really unterstand what you were talking about since I've never been to High School. But I just wanted to make that point.

Huh?

Those are both really good! but the first one was kind of hard to unterstand what it was. Maybe clean it up a bit.

Wow, that was greay. The title imedititly caught my eye when I saw it (Like every title should) and the poem was fantastic. This sounded a little like prose though. ...