hekategirl

There's not much I can say that hasn't already been said, but I don't think this here typo has been corrected though: "Counting from one to one hundred and back ...

I think the one that dreaming_mouse doesn't know what it was for was a public service announcment to eat 3 dairy foods a day. If so thats just wrong... Abd ...

I don't thing the weapons are really appropriate either. Werewolves can only be killed by shooting them through the heart with a silver bullet. A katana or a whip are ...

^Lives in the same state as me. *starts singing California girls* erm...:P

You need to clean it up a bit, the second the most, its kind of hard to tell what your looking at with all the extra lines. but its nice ...

4/10 because its too creepy....and it stares at me...

Its OK, some of my critque on part 2 will seem kind of weird :P

WELCOME BACK! yay! we should have a welcome back party :elephant: :P

This was great, it flowed so well. The (French? am I right?) at the end was a good ending. But like liz said take out the 'The' in: "and streetwise ...

Wow, thats cool. I don't know if you wrote that on the comp or not but if you did thats cool that you wrote it one that had missing KEYS. ...

I'm confused, is the second part up there sopposed to go before part 2 that you posted? its hard to keep up with stories that you post on the same ...

Unwell-Matchbox Twenty

Switch-Will Smith

Just Like a Pill-Pink

9/10 because its Green Day