hekategirl

The re-edited one I like a alot better, but the first one I thought was still good. I agree with Galatea though and all her nitpicks, escpeshily the one wear ...

I was at The Young Writers CLUB and someone in the guest book put the link up, and said "This site is much better!" So I went.

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This poem has good potential but the rythem was bad so didn't flow at all (Which ruins it for me) I didn't really like the way you repeated "*Blank* is ...

Hi my name is hekategirl, and I'm returning to YWS *Everyone says "Hi hekategirl"* ok, maybe now that my friends have deserted me I'll have more time to fool with ...

OMG I gotta go tell me sister...I had no idea it was a real holiday... but before I go! HAPPY LEIF ERICCSON DAY!!!!

You scored as Paganism. Your beliefs are most closely aligned with those of paganism, Wicca, or a similar earth-based religion. You may also follow a Native American religion. Paganism 83% ...

You really has some good imagery here, like: "...sidestep girls clinging to you like a fourth-of-july popsicle stuck to your tongue..." And 'Mascara caked eyelashes' is great. But I'm not ...

Sugar We're Goin Down--Fall Out Boy I love this song!!!!

OK, this is a great story, But CHANGE THE TITLE. When I first read the title I though of a toilet. I thought it was going to be some spoof ...

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Crysi is is Arvandor...welcome back BTW!!!! I remember seeing you when I first joined...but then...you we're gone... *wind blows*...:P :P

Welcome! Welcome! Welcome! yay! Hope you have fun, Jen :elephant:

10/10 Its so purdy!! and its Tonks!

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