hekategirl

arched across the gallows pole the writing of my name, do not leave the ecstasy of what so long ago- Listen the pixies whisper words of warning to whoever wanders ...

I don't know, the whole the 'way to a mans heart is through his stomach' seems over-used to me. But that's just me, theres nothing wrong with that stanza.

I LOVE this. This is awsome. Just some nitpicks though: mirrors in this hallway You say that two times, a little too close together. When I read it the second ...

HA HA! I surprised he only did that little of damage...

Mine I wrote when I was, like, two. It was about a bee, a big bee. We still have it somewhere...

I like this poem, but it needs some tweaks. Mesh, pretty much covered them though. I just want to say: A stomach that is the very Way to his heart ...

This poem was really so-so. The subject was really cliche, but that doesn't mean you can't write about it. It just means you have to find your own unique aspect ...

yellow dock

7/10 It was so-so.

I absolutley love this, Sam. Although I think Shirly's charectar is a little cliche...ah, but who cares. This was awsome. Well done. *Golf Clap*

I like this poem but the rythem was shacky and some of the rhymes were very forced. Reach out for me, I'll calling out to you I think you mean ...

Wow, I like it. It looks a little too blurry though. But if thats what you wanted, forget me :)

yellow

Good emotional rant, but not much a poem for me. For some reason I didn't get the vision of you yelling at me like the others said they did. Although ...

I'm am not a Christian but I don't think it matters, this is an awsome poem. The words you used were great and for some reason I kind of liked ...