hekategirl

I agree that there is something missing from this poem but I can't put my finger on it. But overall I really like this poem! the only thing I didn't ...

I couldn't believe my eyes. All my beliefs had been shattered overnight. I no longer know what to think. What I had seen had destroyed my hopes and my future, ...

Anime

grape

Hi! my name is hekategirl (Or Sierra if you want my real name), I just wanted to intruduce myself and make myself known! :D Well, I really like writing poems. ...

It seems a like a really stupid quiz because you can't mesure writers talent. :evil: But it is kind of fun to do quizes so heres my score: 58. #-o ...

Cruel

I just have a question...how in the hell is Count Chocula a gothic food?! That part was hilararous :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Sierra Nevada

fits

Oh, very nice! I really like how you put the italic lines inbeetween the stanzas. I love this stanza the most. "No fear inside, No tears outside. The chance to ...

They were both beutiful, I love duet poems like this. The rythm was a little off but the beutifullness of the poem covered it up. I really like this one ...

Thanks for the critqe, I agree it is choppy, I wrote this a while ago and wanted some suggestions. Thanks!

I enjoyed reading this alot. But the rythum seemed a little off in some places. But other then that it was fantastic!

It seemed meaningful to me, actaully very meaningful. Actually VERY VERY meaningful!! It was great! I loved it.