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Oh my did I say peices? I ment peace!

Poor TYWC. It's gone to the dogs, I agree, but David hasn't pulled the plug. I'm still a infrequinte member, I actaully went on there today!!!! But, yeah, it's horrible ...

Their O.K, but I wouldn't give them high marks. I to don't want to be harsh, but they were pretty bad. You've got poteintal though!

Hmmm, I sort of liked it, but it was missing something very big. And I was expecting soemthing much bigger at the end. You should put something more there insted ...

Oh, I absolutly adored it. Very descriptive, beutiful. But for some critiqe. The first stanza Do you remember when we used to play limbs intertwined one person two heads? I ...

I love your drawing, it's very pretty.

I'm intrested

I'm really confused about what this is about, it makes no sense to me. Sorry!

Very nice poem, I really liked it! But for some critiqe: "Leathery wings, Take me high. Desperately, I hold on tight. " That stanza sort of started the poem off ...

I dream all the time. But I don't think I'll share any as they're too embarressing. Same here. I dream all the time, but i'll never share any of it.

Thanks everybody!

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I wrote two versions of Heaven, please tell me which one you like better. Heaven 1 The way the angels took me there, The way they spoke, Their words their ...