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Yeah, it does, and if you were going to keep the name Samuel I think you should nickname him Sam.

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I love this Sam! you did a great job on discribing where he was and what he was doing. All I can say is this is great!

Very powerfull, I unterstood your point. But the poem seemed kind of tired, I mean loads of people have written poems like this and your didn't stand out. Make it ...

This is an intresting poem, it flowed well but there was something about it that didn't seem right. The subject seemed kind of blurry to me, like you didn't excatly ...

This sounded like a song to me too, a very nice song too. It seems like a better song then poem actually. But it was very nice.

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