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Death? what is death?-Adrana What is your favorite thing?

It kind of reminded me of a black hole, maybe a red, black hole. Swirling and sucking. It was cool :D

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I really like this, it started it out so-so but it ended up great. The last stanza is my favorite. Although: Dance, american girl, dance on the crazy beat. When ...

I would tell he's got it compleatly wrong, we'renothing like the Simpson's. We're more so. What would you do/say if your mom admitted to you that she has a secret ...

Ok, this seems more like Randomness then actual story...the beginning is actually pretty good, you could make a story out of it. But when you said "Then Ella dies" I'm ...

Darn spell cheaker when it spelled ecstasy for me it capitilized it. Yeah, I know it it desearves a better ending, I'll try to help that.

:P LOL I can't belive I missed that, please exuse me...

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I'd lock all the doors. What would you do if the crazed tryant-wannabe was your dad/mom?

I really like this, it was beautifully written. Although there were numerous spelling mistakes (Probably just typ-os). Remember the spell check is your friend! And also, through out this prologue ...

This is awesome Snoink, one word for it: Beautiful. It is so hard to write an autobiography (Which is what this is right?) I've tried, but you've pulled it off ...

This is a good poem, although the rhyme for last line for every stanza seemed forced to me. The lines were too long. And the third line of the third ...

I should've known it was Daffy Duck all along, his diabolical grimace, his eyes full of hatred. I can't believe I didn't realize it. If I had I might have ...

Well, I don't think the first and second part really connected very well. “Click” the lock sounds, and I breathe a sigh of relief. What if he’s serious? What if ...