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I wasn't saying you HAD to capiltize anything, I was just saying that would look better to ME. But for some reason when people don't capitilize things it takes soemthing ...

I like the ryhme sceame and the flow. It was a nice poem to read but I don't agree with the message, or what I think is the message, it ...

This seemed like babbling to me, but in a good way, some how you got this to flow and make sense. But the overall, I guess, 'plot' of the poem ...

Why did you post this twice???? *scratches head*

This is a good poem; it flowed very well and the ryhme sceame was great! but I don't really unterstanf the point you were trying to get across. But this ...

I don't know what to think of this poem, its good but their is something about that I don't like. And its a little bumpy, but with a little tweaking ...

Welcome to the site Terrwyn!! your going to love it here :-)

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Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...

Hunter has cool sig :-)

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Like your other story (New Story) this sounded true. This is an intresting format, I like it though, but its diffrent. Diffrent in a good way though. Although I have ...

I really like this story, it sounded true, not something you made up. I liked the 'like' inbeetween the sentences; it sounded more like someone was talking to you not ...

I too love the title!!! Folly...Folly...FOLLY!!! anyway this is a nice poem very descriptive. A little bumpy but nice.

I chose other since i'm a combanation of 'Drama' 'Comedy' and 'Horror' and a mabye a few others at some points.