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i'll dance with you Matt! \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ :D :D :D :D :D

Yeah, didn't want to seem harsh or nothing but it didn't seem orginal enough to me

I agree with everything she is saying but this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cliche! you've heard this kind of thing everywhere!! But this is an O.K poem to read.

This is very descriptive and great *runs to read rest*

I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! its so mysterious and cool and freaky, its great!

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I really like this!!!! it has a great message. But of course critque! here you go critque!!! :D I would like it better if you made stanzas and not just ...

Oooh, I like this, I can't really say write more because you already have written more. But the face of the girl....eck, it made a shiver go down my spine. ...

I haven't been bullied physicly, but I have been teased, tormented, laughed at etc.etc. And what the sad part was that I was like 8 or 9 and this 16/17-year-old ...

oops! they both ended with 'front' so I got mixed up *sorry* Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was ...

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O.K next time if I say something like that i'll say something like 'this is my ohpinion' or something like that, but I like the poem anyway! :-)

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