hekategirl

I belive you! but you said 'I can't think of any other explanation for why I am this way.' what way? do you act like a fairy?

why

religon

ELMO!

Uh...Emma? I think.... Do not post here unless you've posted here before.

toxic waste

YAY! i'm wearing a black shirt, black pants, and black socks. Do not post here unless you don't like Harry Potter (this might take a while...)

Huh? what? mabye its just me but I didn't see a conecction to the title and the poem, and the poem itself didn't make much sense ethier. But this stanza ...

I like this poem, very grousome, but I like that :twisted: but this line was a little confusing: [qoute] Fog rolls in dark and dank and smelling of rotten flesh ...

This reminded me of A Shel Silverstein poem, he is a good poet but the theme you picked didn't match that kind of style; fast and childish.

I agree with arieda, the flow went to fast, and the ryhming seemed forced. And like everyone else said this was a litte cheesy.

very weird

broadway

Buzzy The Knowlegde Bug (don't ask...)

Keyboard for everything, hand writing things takes to much time, and I usually mess up so its easier for me to type. And I also have this thing called a ...