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Chirstmas

Dear Golden Oldie, Is their a problem with liking all those shows? I don't think their is. So just be yourself and like them! Love, WASP Dear WASP, I'm writng ...

*psst marching_gurl89 look up* sat

My davvie isn't showing up etheir *grrr* but Nate said he's trying to fix the problem. Also welcome to YWS :D

You called her Nicole *yipes!* she hates that!

atomic bombs

frat

drawing

This isn't like poetry, its just 'a random stream of thought' like Chanson said. It needs more emotion, it needs more imagry etc. I don't get anything out of this, ...

I like this, but it was to short, and like Dreami said, it reminds me of a poem on a valintine card. But its sweet, I like it.

I really like this, and like Dreami said you just say 'Because' insted of 'becoz' it sounds more qoute-ish ;-)

No offense niteowl but it does sound like a scam, but if their not asking you for any money it doesn't really do any finaical harm. And BTW I love ...

snow

I really like this, it flowed very nicely, but I agree with Emma; it seems like it should be longer. And when you tell us what its about at the ...

I love the idea for this poem; from a dying person veiw. Its so unique. I love it. But for some critque: Standing on the rim of hell Waiting to ...