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Hey, Emsie dear! So this the Dylan, huh? Oh, must I say I really liked this one! And I am getting so used to our mails and stuff that I ...

Hello again folks! I have neglected YWS for a little while due to much work and always being out of energy, but I'm better now and feeling rather guilty for ...

Oh, this was just lovely. I like the way we can all relate to it. It's the exact feeling of being in love or having a crush on someone. And ...

Haha, nice one Evi! Oh, this just made me laugh, 'cause it is so true. All hail Google - the almighty! Liz

Thanks Rosey! Your help is really priceless. I'll change loads when I'm on the editing feel of things;) I've changed a lot in the two first chapters (not posted it ...

Hello, I'm back again. So this is the third chapter of my novel. I'm not really pleased with the title of the chapter, it doesn't really sound that good, so ...

I really liked this, I have to say. I mean, it was simple but it is one of those songs that reminds you of the good `ol bubble gum sweet ...

Thanks Rosey! =)

Hey, Ems! Your ending is fab! You leave me hanging for more! I can't wait for chapter 3 now! Critisism: - There are still some spelling mistakes and words that ...

Hey! I'm sorry it took so long to look at your work, but I've been soooo busy lately. Anyway, you asked for my opinion, so here it is: -I read ...

Hi! I'm Liz and I just felt the need of dropping a few lines to you. 1. I see there is three chapters in one here. Not necessarily a bad ...

HI! You know I really liked this. And the fact that it doesn't show to much imagery doesn't bother me. I liked it. Thinking can save your life, thinking too ...

Ok, so I was just scrolling down the front page of YWS and your story totally captivated me. I couldn't take my eyes of it until the end. And as ...

To MARS: Thank you. Yeah, well, i though I would put the reason the promise as the last chapter, but maybe it should be the prologue?? It's a thinker...;) I ...

Guys, thank you soooo much. It really helps to get other words in. Sometimes I can see myself blind on my own text, not really noticing how much i might ...