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Beautiful poem. this is something all young girls should read. No body should be anything else but themselves. Forever Threnody already pointed out all of your spelling errors. And i ...

The fact that it's all over the place is explained in the next chapter. Sorry if it's confusing.

A friend help me get the idea for this story. Character: So far Sara and Jane, teir parents,and an old man that lives nearby. No last names yet. The idea ...

oooh, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I understand that she is upset by being stallked by a celebrity, but what did he do to make her ...

I like this because it shows us the personality of your main character.otherwise anything I would have mentioned has already been written above, so I won't bore you by repeating ...

I like the story idea this has started, it's a whole nother point of view I do,'t think anyone has written yet.

When I was in 4th or 5th grade. I started writing poetry, and a series called Cassandra Hampton. They were mysteries like Nancy Drew.

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This is really well written and very emotional. I am lifeless and broken- Stripped of love, Stripped of light I am hopelessly drownded- Reaching for life, Reaching for love. I ...

I love the message this poem has, and the way you portray it. It starts off dark and gloomy and ends full of light. I must climb towards it Inch ...