heart_of_the_artist

The first line is kind of boring, but the rest is funny, ironic and very well written. I especially like the second stanza. My only nit-pick is that all the ...

It was good, just remember to change youre upper and lower cases on letters. Personally I usually don't care about the length of a poem, but this one could almost ...

Good job, i like how the rythem at the begining is a little off, but gets smoother latter it adds to the character of the poem, even if you didn't ...

This has potential, but with what you have it is kind of boring. I would suggest adding another stanza or two, give the poem more meaning, we know what you're ...

Wow, another amazing poem. This is so realistic and kind of scary. the scketchy rythem addds to the feelings and thoughts of the character. Be careful of you're capitalization, i ...

This poem's rythm is a little off, but I enjoyed it anyway. I like the story it tells, it's refreshing to hear someone say how much they hate someone, but ...

I love this poem, it is very inspireing. When you're at the top, With nothing to lose.. Dont let your gaurd down, You'll just get used. Dont give up Through ...

Eather here or lyric poetry, not shure. This was a nice poem, short and simple, and straight to the point ( in it's own way). Just change the letters from ...

This was very interesting. I like the description you use in you're poetry. cool moonlight, so tender and pure, weeping eyes of heaven. silver arrows down to earth, gentle and ...

Great lyrics, I agree it's very catchy. I love the meaning of the song, really inspiring. usually when I read songs or poems I would post my favorite parts, but ...

This was so beautiful and sad. I love how you start out as the girl and it's all sad, then you're telling the girl she is wonderful and can move ...

So, this is where it really starts to get interesting. One thing I would change is the strange way this line is worded: Good job I’m not a regular smoker. ...

I just watched the trailer a few minutes ago. It look amazing, mabe better than the first.

Which is your favorite, please take out any personal opinions on the person themselves ( like bad public image). Just think of talent.

Yes, I like them. But some of the songs on their second CD are not very good, just two or three, and the show Jonas dosn't seem all that great. ...