hayley10019

Hiya! I really liked it. It was very emotional and I liked all the connections you made... But... for the raindrop.. I took it as you (or who ever it ...

Besides you feeling that way, which is terrible, it was a good poem. I like how you incorerated the title with the words, and ryhmed... and it sounded good! I ...

Haha thank you! I put all the period and commas on...but when I copied & pasted it, it didn't seem to work. But thank you! (:

Hey. Really good story. I was really interested and hope to see more. I didn't notice anything really bad, and thought your writing was very good! One thing though. When ...

A moment when all things stop is what I'd like to see. A moment when all pain is gone And everyone is free Where no one is too busy to ...

Hiya! Well I am in the imbetween. (: It was indeed a little list like... but still... It was VERRRRRRY creative... and cool! I liked how you put together each ...

Very interesting.... I will say it was.. very very weird.... and in a way a little creepy. But don't take that in offence. It was still very interesting... the story ...

I really liked this poem... It flowed well and had a great concept. If you wer bored, well done. And I would love to see what your writing is like ...

I liked it a lot. I cannot say I exactly relate... but I can say I at least 5% of the way realate. I liked the peice and how you ...

Hey. I see what you mean, I just don't see it as a poem. I see the emotions coming from the poem, and it's a very powerful tactic to use ...

Hey Ben, I really liked the story of the poem. I could connect wih it and it made a lot of sence. Your word choice was not over done, and ...

I'm American! Haha. Hope I can help. I use: Dang it Shoot Crap Frick Fricker Fudge Oh my god What the hell What the f*** Darn it Shiz If I'm ...

Haha thanks everyone! Lover? Huhhh. Oh and to the editing person...: Thank you! I do enjoy writing poems and I'm very enthusastic that someone that doesn't know me notices I ...

You looked across the room Where I stood with a friend that you knew You walked over and talked for a while As I laughed in harmony with you A ...

You took what was mine What I so ever wanted to share with you My heart that would soar with a touch With a smile, with a kiss, with a ...