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I swore to myself that I'd never let it in. The demon, the devil, the torturous sin. The thing that would beat me, and listen to my cries. And do ...

Thank you both... I did figure my post was a little long, and at the time I figured it would be okay... I find that if interested the reader will ...

Part One Chapter One "Where are you from?" "Up the road. Mt. Serius." The boy was young, and positively nieve. The men around the bar laughed. "Oh?" One finally said. ...

he opened my eyes opened my thighs kissed me sucked my soul banished my fear bit my ear touched me ate me alive tore out my heart spread me apart ...

Well... I like to write and I wanted to find a website to post my writing... I searched on Google.. This was the 3rd one I believe (I never choose ...

Wow... That was really powerful. I liked the word choice... I liked the ending (well.. not like but.. you know). I liked the pattern... I just--- LIKE IT! I could ...

Darkness approaches,as I sink into myself.Deeper and deeper,Under the ocean, in my head...Not blue, but grey.Not sunlit, maybe not even this fake?As a misty, faded old footpathThat had once led ...

Some people might not like it.. but it's probably because they can't realate at all... but I can and I like it.! It's well written.. I like the format.. and ...

Ahh! Haha thank you! Well I am a poetry gal.. I only usually write poems and thus why this is not the best! I wanted to try something new and.. ...

**** Before reading thing you must note that I was once in a very highly religous church. With many rules to follow. It was a sin to do the simplest ...

Hello there! This was an excellent peice... I saw the story plot.. but I didn't see this particular writing.... as a story. It is a mix between a story, and ...

EloquentDragon wrote: Humph, but these democrats, I gotta tell you something, they are a bunch off…stubborn headed mules if I ever saw em.’ When he says that he is refraining ...

Very good I liked it... Though I will say from experience... Telling or... even hinting to a parent that you are pregnat usually makes you sick... The feeling makes you ...

I agree with the above points and wish not to re-write them all out. But what I want to elaborate more on is the fact offff: There is no natural ...

Thank you all! (: I like your ideas, and hope to fix what needs to be! Thank you soo muchhh! (: