hayley10019

It's quite beautiful and short. I liked it all, and I don't want to write too much but I liked it a lot! (:

I liked it. Very intimate and..emotional. It took a lot of will power to put something of this sort on here and I congratulate you for that. I have no ...

I'm not sure if this was about you feeling evil, or just.. seeing evil itself around or in you. But still, I liked the poem because of the way you ...

I loved it. I always like it when a writer...writes...about writing. Lol. But it explained writing itself and I liked the way you wrote it. You showed what the basics ...

I liked it. It was very intense and had a lot of regret and emotion in it. Usually rhyming is over done or not good with the poems, but with ...

I really liked it! It was interesting, short and sweet! I'm not too sure what I can say about this because there are no flaws and not much there that ...

Congrats on your first poem. It was good, but like others said before you did rely on rhyming a lot. But that's not too bad. But if you can't get ...

I liked it a lot. I see how you feel, how your hurt and mad. How your still in question and how you honestly don't know where to go or ...

I really liked it and you picked a topic that a LOT of people can relate to. Me being one of them. Thinking you love someone, and then being let ...

Ooh really dark and the imagery wasn't so told that you had no room for imagination. There was plenty room for the reader to image thing and I liked it. ...

Honestly I didn't see much imagery. And I also think it could have been more detailed. More...emotion. It had a lot of emotion in it, but I felt that what ...

I saw nothing wrong at all with the poem and honestly, I can say that I feel the same. That I've been there (am there) and wondering why it takes ...

I would sit in my room, waiting to pull, pull the invisible trigger. Waiting for me to let myself give up, waiting for me to say that I honestly did ...

I can honestly say I really enjoyed this poem. I can't complain about anything and just felt I should comment to tell you how much I liked it. And if ...

I can say that a lot of people would agree and I can say I can also! I liked it, but I have a few pointers or..questions: I see how ...