hayley10019

A mother had a baby, her pride and joy. Her joy was forgotten when she met another boy. A boy who took her away, and beat her at night. The ...

I really liked this poem. It was very dramatic and nice.. But I felt it was a little long. I think it should be in more of the dramatic poetry ...

It was a good first poem! I liked your referances to pens and.. office supplies. It was cute and sweet. Although, I'm not sure about the ending? Maybe it's just ...

I liked it a lot! I thought it was cute! But the last line.. doesn't really work. You need more of a story to make an abrupt ending such as ...

Oh my God! While reading my heart was racing! I felt terrible! Terrible for the girl but I also felt how she could move on. How she could move on ...

This poem was beautiful and honestly something everyone can connect to. I liked the poem, the length and the connection to the windows and the eyes, the blind.. the.. The ...

I don't care what anyone else says. It was beautiful and I like it a LOT. There maybe was a little forced rhyming at some points but it still was ...

I liked it. I didn't think it could be a descriptive, emotional poem since it was so short, but it was. I liked it. How in the poem you were ...

Honestly there is nothing to judge here. It was an amazingly well written poem. It conveyed lust in..a graphic manner and made the reader keep reading. If the title were ...

Awe! I thought it was ADORABLE! It was really sweet and cute.. And honestly I hope you get this girl if you want her this bad! It's a great poem! ...

It's cute and short and sweet! The only thing is I think you need a little more emotion? Maybe? I don't want to be too rude but I feel like ...

Wow. I thought it was a powerful poem. I liked it all.. a lot. I liked the rhyming and just the poem itself. There was a lot of emotion and ...

I enjoyed it a lot. Aside from the different rhyming schemes I liked and understood the poem well. Everyone is a therapist at sometime and I honestly believe that your ...

I really liked your imagery. It was nice watching the images as you read along with the poem. But, I think you mean 'because' not 'becoz' on the second line? ...

I don't care what anyone else says about the rhyming and the Her-her thing, it was amazing and precious. It was something that you can only write with true emotion. ...