hayley10019

Once you were a mother, today you still are. Just not the same, you're distant and far. You used to care, or act like you did. Now all you worry ...

I don't mean this in an offensive way towards anyone else, but screw what they say. I found the poem funny, and exactly how a writers feels when they've got ...

Ello! The first Chapter and I'm already really drawn in! I'm ready to read the rest so please, please continue! And also, if you'd please somehow possibly send me each ...

I liked it, at first I was confused on the meaning of the poem and what it was written for, but once at the end most of it was clear. ...

Thank you soo much! I love all the reviews and yes.. I will keep writing! Thank you(:

Thank you all so much for your reviews. And I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. (:

As she walks by you, you notice her beauty. You notice her smile, her stance, her grace. She looks invincible, strong, and pure. Her smile shines for miles and miles. ...

This was defiantly a really happy love-y poem and it was really cute. It wasn't too sappy, but sappy enough to get the point across that it was this cute ...

I really liked it. I like the first stanza, how you connected a secret path to your soul. Maybe suggesting that no one really can get there. I liked it ...

Wow. I really liked it. It was dark, but lovely! So much emotion tumbled out of the poem! Dark emotion! And it was lovely! I really liked it. How your ...

I thought it was really cute but it's the numbers that got me.. But still, I liked it. I thought it was really cute.. but very sappy. Anyway, I thought ...

Thank you! It's actually a true story.. Ha. But anyway, I'm thinking about changing it up a little bit! I'll have to look at it and change it a little! ...

I really liked this. I thought it was beautiful and wonderfully written. I liked the stanzas.. the story.. the.. Everything about this poem was good. I have nothing to complain ...

I really liked it. It was dark, and intense and.. Just riveting! It was a good poem and I liked the "play by play" action each stanza. Depression sucks doesn't ...

I really liked this poem. It was riveting. Taking you on a ride of questions that most cannot answer. And that's the point right? Showing the reader...following the footsteps of ...