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Re: Chapter 1 - Not-yet-named book
Thank you everybody for your helpful suggestions ...... I will definitely incorporate them in my next chapter...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Not-yet-named book
1. DISTURBED Adrianna Distant familiar memories flashed through my head sending emotions of both happiness and sadness, mostly sadness through me. Images of a newborn baby with distinct brown eyes ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: The Hottest Day Of School For Brett
i liked the your style of writing but a little more insight into the characters' (Brett and Jasmine) will make the stor much better.... otherwise good work. keep it up!!
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: The Guardians.
nice work.... it was amazing and enthralling .... keep it up !!!
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Music and Lyrics
nice job and as said by the others i loved the incorporation of the songs which are coincidently my favorite........ so keep up the good work !!!! :D
Apr 8, 2011