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Chapter 2 Men in the Black At lunch Sam said he could drive me home again. I took the offer, not wanting to walk home. Only after we started heading ...

Holy goodness!! More, more, I need more!! This is an amazing prologue!! It pulled the reader in and sets up the story you are about to tell. The intro is ...

First off, your avatar pic thing (or whatever it is) is amazing. I love that quote!! :D Anyway, I really liked this poem. The metaphors were good, and it helped ...

I really liked this poem. I had to read it again after I read the ending. I have never really read a poem like this, and I loved it. The ...

Hello. I really liked this poem. I know what it feels like to be alone, and you described it almost perfectly. Just a few things I noticed : the other ...

Sorry for the horrible description. Here is a better one : Mae Vamp, an ordinary teenager...well, beside the fact she drinks blood, can hear everything you're saying from 300 feet ...

First off, thank you for reviewing my poem, World That I Create. :) This poem, I thought, was really creative. Your word choice was very olden times (I am not ...

When the sun shines in the morning I wish it would go down My dream world is so much better Than the real world is now In my dream world, ...

I really liked this poem. It flowed and had a good rhyme scheme. One thing I noticed was this line : "You think I can't catch you lies." Either it ...