harshita3chaarag

WOW!!! It was so beautiful!! I loved it immediately!! I love the way you have expressed the feeling and hatred for the pain of all those people.. It expresses something ...

Hi.. I really don't know what to say.. Yeah it was really very short.. Though the three lines are good enough but in my opinion I think you ought to ...

Hi.. Like the first reviewer I'll also say that there is a lot of repetition.. Replace the words and you could make this good poem a very brilliant one.. The ...

Hi Priyansha.. I'll begin off saying that he idea and theme were what I liked.. I would agree to what other reviewers have said: it indeed was a bit boring.. ...

Hi ilyah!! Welcome to YWS!! I'm sure you'll have a lovely time here... People here are very friendly and ope so you need not hesitate before asking for help from ...

Hello Chrisila!! Welcome to YWS!! You'll love it here!! One thing I'll like you to know: in case you need any kind of help or assistance, feel free to PM ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED name: well you can call me anything you're comfortable with since my name is often too difficult to pronounce. Still my name is Harshita.. age: I'm 14 ...

Hi everyone!! A welcome to all the new comers..!! :mrgreen: You'll love this site and believe me this place is like a heaven for a writer... just to tell you ...

Welcome to YWS!! I will ensure you you'll Love it.. Now for the review.. I have no nitpicks.. It was so good!! I instantly loved it.. The rhyme scheme was ...

hey.. I'll point d only mistake i sensed.. The flow overall was good but sort of lost in the last stanza. Then also maybe you should change the ending a ...

very nice.. The flow was gentle and smooth and also depth had me lost.. very well written and the inspiration must have been serious.. well done:)

Hi, It was very funny and enjoyable!! Really good read. Great flow and the rhyme was good too... But the best part was, I totally understood it!! it so irritating ...

Hi, like Bolshevik i would say that the first line was very nice!! Very well written but a little improvement would be healthy for your poem... good work!!:)

Hi. this was very nice and flowed very smoothly.. though like Snickerdooly i would also say, that adding another stanza would be good.. it is sounding sort of incomplete. thats ...

Its good. probably changing the sentence structure a bit would be good.. otherwise, nicely done:)