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Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
hi.. So read it and I was like laughing my head off!!! Brilliant!! It was extremely funny. Nice thing to give for an assignment.. I bet your teacher had loads ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: My Daddy, The General
Hey.. So I've come to review.. I found the topic quite interesting so I came.. Well I must say its brilliant.. Like kinzzy, I will also say that the starting ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: cicadian
Hi.. So i really have no idea what to say..the brilliancy of the poem has taken away my words (i speak very truthfully)! It was a very well written and ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Friendship
Hi.. So starting was very nice and it flowed pretty well, and that made it a nice read.. Secondly i love the theme of your poem. also the simplicity with ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Are you rejecting me?
Hi.. I just wanna say that your poem is very nice.. the rhyme was very smooth so it flowed very easily.. Good work.. Keep it up.. Harshita:)
May 11, 2011 -
Re: My Monster
Hi.. Well I really liked your poem.. It was good and flowed really smooth..:) Keep up the good work Hrshita:)
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Stalking My Stalker
Hi.. Well firs off, You got what you wanted.. probably (that's my guess..) You must have wanted people to laugh on reading this.. and guess what, You got it!! I ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Emergency
Hi.. I believe you are new here so, welcome to YWS!! If it is your first post her then I gotta say a thing- That was a bang and awesome ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: My Best Friend
Hi.. okay, the theme and selection for topic was nice.. But I too will say that it was very very forced.. The flow just was disrupted at so many places ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Just a Traitor
Hi.. Welcome to YWS!! Hope you'll love it!! alright.. I'll begin by saying that I liked your poem very much.. Except for a n error or two it was very ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Dear, YWS
Hi.. Awesome poem!! I just loved it!! It was so true and something I related to... Good job.. YWS deserves this poem!! You've done a good job by writing something ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
this poem was very sweet and nice.. I really did like it.. Using this theme of being broken after love was very well decided... Something natural and something one can ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
Hi.. I can't help but say its really great.. You've given it a very nice starting. though the flow was good, somehow I felt that maybe this poem would have ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Bruised and Bloodied, We Wipe the Tears Away
Hey.. So I'll begin by saying that your poem was nice.. The emotions have been expressed very nicely and deeply.. This whole concept was also very nice.. the imagery was ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Misrepresented Guardians
Hi.. Welcome to YWS!! I'll start by saying that it was very descriptive so it had me glued o screen. very nice but i will be honest and tell you ...
May 1, 2011
