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Re: Love Bites, Especially When You're a Plus Size!
hi there.. Well I just love your novel.. well what you've written of it till now at least.. It's so good!! Can't wait to read more!! Your choice of words ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: And my inspiration walked right out the door.
Hello.. Awwie!! This is so sweet!! Nate will be so happy to know such a lovely poem has been written for him!! I think you've done a fabulous work!! Love ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Heartbreak
Hi there.. Well what you've written is good.. The only thing I find amendable is the length.. It's too short!! Lacks content and that's making it sound incomplete.. add a ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: The before and after of slapping someone with a wet fish.
hi... So whether it was related to the title or was FABULOUS!! I just loved reading it.. so much fun. And it was so Funny!! Brilliant job..!! Harshita:)
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: L.O.V.E= Fail!
hi.. So all in all I really liked your poem. Nut I too will say that you should rearrange the stanzas.. Also What you've done with the rhyme is very ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Time For Revolution
oh boy!! This was so good!! I literally loved it!! And.. oh I just don't know what to say.. Speechless.. There's nothing wrong with it, That I can point out.. ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: I love you, too.
hi.. I really liked your piece.. It was very well written. The only thing i didn't like was the repetition.. it was a good line but i personally didn't find ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Im Too Young For Love
hi... So I'll be reviewing your piece today... To start its a good piece... But the only thing is it's too short.. You should add more to it.. Like the ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: 1,000,000
WOHOO!! Time to celebrate YWSers!!
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)
Loved it!! Loved it loved it loved it loved it!!! So much!! Brilliant!! totally engrossing, enjoyable, lovable, fun, exiting, blah, blah..... for a potter fan like me!!!!! Awesome!! Harshita:)
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Daddy
hey.. so I'm reading it and my dad is sitting besides me.. and I start crying!! It was so touching and moving, and emotional and lovely!! It made me see ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Mischief Managed: Saying "Until Next Time" To Harry
hi there... It was the title of your piece that caught my interest.. Nothing is more inviting to a potter fan like me than something like this.. This was a ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: The lesson of the TP
gosh I loved it!! It was so funny and lively.. See i loved it so much that I even forgot to say hi to you... Hi!!! your poem was nicely ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Finding a home
Hello... So I just Loved your poem.. The concept was good and that made it click.. Correct me if I'm wrong but I believe the poem was a free verse, ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Tropism
Hi there... So it was a good thing you didn't add a rhyme scheme... I'll be honest in saying that I didn't understand parts of the poem. But what I ...
Jul 4, 2011
