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Re: The Ballerina
hey.... I really liked your was nice...first of its kind that I have read... the flow did break at a few points and needs slight improvement...but it will do without ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: I'm Here, Always
oh god...!!! this so much like something i am feeling!!! I can totally relate!!! Even I have dear friend I have said a thousand sorries to but she won't listen..... ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Me and You...
Hi everybody...thanks for reviewing the poem.... I would just like to say that I wasn't paying any attention on the rhyme scheme...thats why its not in all places.... But still ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Me and You...
I don't really get on what basis to categorize my poems....don't mind if i got the wrong category(again)... Please read through and review, whether appreciating or criticizing, It doesn't matter. ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: A Chance For Hearts
its a good story....I really enjoyed reading through it....I hope you will soon put up the sequel...because im dying to read it...the depth of emotions has been written wonderfully...I couldn't ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The Glade
well...its been written very beautifully.... the details you have captured are very deep and nice... The ending was not what i expected it was surprising and shocking....But it was a ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Mask
I wrote this poem a few days back...when life seemed to be on the peak of darkness.....I hope that time ever comes again... mistake pontifications, suggestions, help, improvement, everything is ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: I'll Love You In the Next
this is a very sweet poem...alredy on the topic im partial too.....I thing i realized through your poem was that "Love never dies". this statement has been spoken over and ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Just a dream
i can understand the relief you must have felt n waking up!!!:D I hate these kind of heart breaking was a very nice poem....and a bad dream....enjoyed reading it!!:)
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: HaRm YoU :(
it was so nice...i love the way you have captured the hurt and the pain....I mean by reading the poem itself I could make out the extent of hurt and ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Track marks
one thing......I firstly loved your poem....its very nice.... I know how it feels when life is upside down...and suicide seems to be the only friend has also attempted but God ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Little farm
a first attempt...its a very good poem indeed.... *applause*!! thats what i do for every poems only...even my dear friends...well i love the way you have attempted to capture every ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Shattered
well....this is a very deep poem....the kind i LOVE to is really very nice...keep up your works...:)
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: The Worst Feeling
I read the poem and thought...."W-O-W"!!!! its brilliant...!! and i car completely relate to it!!!! I can understand the extent of pain experiences like these cause....and i hope it came ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Corazón
awww...thats a really very ssweet poem...the line i loved the most was "Your face, darling--it's my sunshine." It is really very sweet..... thinking of whomever you have written this very ...
Feb 20, 2011
