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Hey Matt... Welcome to YWS!!! You'll love it here...:) I really liked your poem... The only thing which I felt wrong was the size... I would have liked it more ...

I just loved the chapter!!1 Its brilliant.... And i am hoping very very hard that coming part is awesome too!!!! :)

Hey there...!! first of all welcome to YWS!!! now for reviewing... I suppose The set up is in India. The language of the shopkeeper tipped me off... Your work needs ...

nicely done dude. what I really really loved were the dialogues. Very nice specially by Ashlyn... Anyone can make out the absolute hatred that lies their. And i also love ...

This novel is AMAZING!!!! I just love it!!! You ROCK!!!! please please please write loads more!!!! :)

Hi again!!! This chapter was very nice too... Though honestly in the end I got slightly confused... The error I could make out were spelling and grammatical errors. You need ...

HI!! I liked the piece very much. A good beginning for, Hopefully, something even better. What caught my attention was the detailed description of things and people. The description was ...

Hi!!! the piece has been Written very nicely... My favorite part was when The narrator and his mother decline help from the dad...Because that's what he deserved!!! I really liked ...

Even if you hadn't threatened my nature... I would have replied...because I liked it a lot...!!! it indeed is very nice. What I really loved was that you have shown ...

hi... Ita nice poem.. I liked it pretty much... Keep writing...:)

hey... I can't criticize so I won't criticize... I'm just going to appreciate... Its really very nice and deep... keep writing:)

hey KatTrain... This is a brilliant poem!!! I just Loved it...!!!:) The flow was so smooth and deapth of it took me by surprise and delight... Keep writing!!!:)

hey.. Its very nice poem and the title is good too... I did love the repetition of emphasized the importance of the day "tomorrow"... Hope you write more and more ...

hey there... Its a nicely written poem.... Very nicely indeed...Though I understand the reason for using the F word so much, I believe decreased use would have been better... But ...

hey there.... Its a very nice poem.... Im not surprised you like it!!! I know you want criticism but the thing is im really small and can't make out mistakes...just ...